The introduction feels underdeveloped. The ideas in the sentences are not well developed nor are they bridged well enough to show a comprehensive introduction of the topic and the commercial. Moreover, the transitions between ideas are not well bridged. One reason for this is that the sources in your essay are not integrated very clearly. Always introduce your sources by the author’s full name, text’s title, and very brief summary of the source before moving onto a quote by the author/source. This will bridge their ideas more fully with your own. On the works cited page: Missing citation for the Volkswagen commercial you analyzed in this essay. Are you citing the book by Solomon, or the PDF version of the reading I provided on Canvas. Be sure you cite the version of the text you have used for this essay. If citing the readings as a PDF, refer to module page tiled “MLA Overview: Format and the Works Cited Page.” As you prepare this essay for final submission, continue to develop on your points and fine tune your sentences, checking grammar and syntax. Requirements: revise | .doc file
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