Working on Transactional Writing Plan

Im writing an article based on how music effects people. Im following a RHETORIC structure so far I have this for the rhetorical question hyperbole example and tricolon I still need to do objection repetition and chiasmus (and inclusion?). Any tips or improvements before I further go on? ‘How Music Effects People’ Have you ever listened to a song or playlist just because it gives you a certain emotion? Whether it’s feeling ecstatic or dispirited does it move you and make you feel different? There are days where we can look through a car window and listen to a playlist for hours it feels like you are completely in your own world that you the only one there. For the times you need to lock out all the things around you to concentrate on what you need to do putting on some intense music can make it feel like you can put my mind to anything and get it done. Every beat is like a cheer to keep pushing for the next step you can feel it flow throughout your body. Being in a concert surrounded by others listening to the same music as you it feels like you are soaring in a trance and completely fulfilled. Requirements: As much as needed | .doc file