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Descriptionplease read carefully attached document and this-

PLEASE JUST MAKE THE REST OF IT UP FROM WHAT IVE WRITTEN

PLEASE USE THE CORRECT REFERENCE AND PLEASE CHECK ALL REFERENCING IS CORRECT

MAKE IT CLEAR THE ASPECI OF NURSING CARE CHOSEN- WHICH IS COMMUNICATING WITH CHILD WITH ALL

DONT SAY THE BOY, MAKE A FAKE NAME FOR HIM

WRITE AT THE TOP THAT YOU ARW USING CONFIDENTLY IN THIS REPORT THEREFORE YOUR USING THE NAME . NOT SURE HOW YOU WRITE IT BUT YOU GET WHAT I MEAN

FOLLOW THE SUBHEADING FROM THE BREIF SO ALL THE ONES IVE WRITTEN NEED CHANGING

10% IS THE INTOR

10% IS THE END

80% IS THE REST OF THE WRITING

WHEN MENTIONING COMMUNICATION OF A 6YEAR OLD, WHAT STAGE IS HE AT? USE PAJAS WORK AND BULBAY WORK NOT SURE IF THATS SPELT WRITE PLEASE GOOGLE

MAKE IT CLEAR AND IN MORE DEPTH, WRITE IT AS THOUGH THE PERSON IS DUMB AND HAS NO IDEA WHAT ITS ABOUT, ITS GOT TO FLOW

ALSO WHEN TALKING ABOUT COMMUNICATION, IS HE communicating THROUGH PLAY? THERAPEUTIC RELATIONSHIP? PLEASE STAGE THIS

PLEASE TAKE OUT THE WORK BEFUDDLED AND I KEPT COOL. PLEASE WRITE THIS PROFESSIONAL AND THIS IS A PROFESSIONAL PIECE OF WRITING.

WHEN IM TALKING ABOUT ANXIETY PLEASE TELL MORE AND WRITE THIS MORE IN DEPTH, IS THIS SEPARATION ANXIETY FROM HIS FAMILY?

WHEN IM TALKING ABOUT PLAY, EXPLAIN HOW I PLAYED WITH HIS, HOW DID I ENGAGE WITH HIM? WHAT WAS HE INTERESTED IN? HOW DID THE MULTIPROSSIOANL TEAM ENGAGE WITH HIM

WHEN I MENTIONED PHYSICAL DISABILITY PLEASE CAN YOU MENTION ANY PHYSICAL DISABILITY IN DETAIL.

Please don’t say the staff and doctor there all one team

WHEN TALKING ABOUT PAIN, PLEASE USE THE PAIN TOOL SAY I USED THE PAIN TOOL AND EXPLAIN WHAT IT IS WITH A REFRENCE

WHEN I SAID HE WASNT ABLE TO SOCLAISE WITH HIS FAMILY, PLEASE CAN YOU CHANGE THIS AND SAY HE WAS AS HE WAS END OF LIFE

Think about decision making theories and involving children and families in decision making

Then look at transition and personlisatiion care from student to then being qualified. Lesdershio and delegation. Look at Oxford medical simulation.

Think of culture and human factors in relation to your devolopong role and self awareness and responsibility.

This is the comment from my lecture for the draft-

You make many sweeping statements in your writing that are not supported with evidence.

You make many assumptions and statements that make no sense and these require review.

You would be better placed to use up-to-date evidence that supports your discussion points.

Your in text references are generally wrong. Please review the APA Havard Guidelines

Much of this writing often appears to be well structured, other parts not so well structured which could indicate excessive use of unsubstantiated direct quotes, hence the high similarity score of 33. Please be very careful here. WORD COUNT IS INCLUDING INTEXT REFRENCING ONLY NOT REFRENCE LIST AT THE BOTTOM. PLEASE ALSO ADD REFRENCE WHERE NEEDED.