Importance Of My Experience In Learning English

People in the world changed their behavior and thinking as times go passed. For example, people the more they practice on reading and writing, the more they have knowledge about the concept. In my experiences in learning English, I have gained some skills throughout my studying year. It is because time is the main key to become an expert in something that we are constantly doing. In those time, we will learn something new that we have never learned before however, as time passed we will become more familiar with what we been doing. In my essay 1, I said “Nobody is born to be smart, intelligent to know everything. We all started from step zero where we do not know anything about the world which is full of unique things”.  According to this quote, I claimed that everyone needs to take their time to learn new things because the more time we take, the better be in what we are doing. While I am learning to improve my writing style, I still have failure because I did not the real definition of academic writing and reading. However, there is one thing I learned throughout this semester; revision is the main key to success in academic reading and writing.  
 
Writing essays can be really difficult for me, especially as a college student. The reason why English Professors want us to write an essay is because they want to see how well we can interpret with the text and by ourselves. However, the first time that comes in our mind and write it down doesn’t make the essay look perfect. It is because sometimes we might misunderstand the prompts or some main ideas might not included. Therefore, revision is really important in academic writing because it gives us a second chance to look back, our essays and see what are we missing. For example, in my Essay 2 draft, there is one paragraph that I did not fully answer the prompt and connect back to my thesis. I ended the paragraph by saying “Therefore, the beliefs of the tourists want to explore the culture of the resident and what is the history behind”. According to this quote, the reader may not understand what I really wanted to say like why the fisherman’s wharf sign is the main audience for tourists. Therefore, in my revision I need to explain why the sign is important by